This is unbelievably good. I love the careful way you've restructured the events of the movie to fit with this vision of the world, building Arthur into this mythic figure, almost: it's very fitting. All of the scenes between Arthur and Eames are heartbreaking, and it hurts so much when Arthur says to Cobb, "You're not," he says. "But you know that I would have been, in time."
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