ext_140691 ([identity profile] duonoaikouka.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mirabellafic 2011-05-10 05:22 am (UTC)

uuuummmm.... excuse me while I pant my brains out, please? :D

When I saw "Veela" in the summary, I knew this had to be something special, and boy was I right. Your word flow is something else, flowing from humor to frakkin' hot in a split second with no jarring jump. It's all so smooth. Kudos for that.

And Kono!!! Oh I cackled like a nut with her "You got me pregnant!" line. You go girl! Save Danno for his Steve. LOL

This was an awesome fic that gave me giggles and made me wiggle in my chair, too. Fantastic!!

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