oh my god. this is so creepy... in a good way! i love how you've combined the gore with the psychological horror of it all... i mean, monster movies are fun, but the bloody stuff's just not that scary if there's no meaning behind it, you know?

i feel sexist saying this, but given that all klieman's victims are female, i can't help but wonder if this extraction would be even more dangerous if ariadne was there as well... but matching a character with a serial killer's vic profile is such a cliche plot device, so kudos to you for avoiding it? ^^;

anyway, love this story so far, can't wait to read more!